Evalutation of the Rough Cut

Il Est Interdit - Evaluation
Having received feedback from the group, we are now aware of more areas of our thriller that need to be improved, on top of what we we had already discussed.

There was not much variation in the lighting, so we may be able to edit the clips to make the contrast between light and dark more subtle. The plot can be viewed as unclear at points, therefore the order in which we have placed the clips could be altered to adhere to this.

To add variety to the font, and exclude repetition, we will change the sizing and placing of it for each separate title. We may also change the actual font to avoid mis-readings, especially as it is written in another language. More transitions could also be added to the titles, to make them more interesting, and to fit in with the music and shots so that they are more inclusive within the sequence. We are also considering extending the length the titles appear for so that the audience will have more time to read them.

We will create an appropriate soundtrack to accompany the shots and titles, alongside the timing etc. For the footsteps, we will add diegetic sound, to add to the atmosphere.

Finally we will check that all shots run smoothly, and that there is a consistency throughout the piece.